Wandering [OPEN]

[[ WOLVERINE ]]

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[atrb=background,http://i55.tinypic.com/skzx9j.jpg] The black mongrel king's ears pointed to his body and his black nails digging into the ground with each step of his paws. "No actually... ha ha... I've just begun this game." Black shadow lowered his head once again and ran towards the painted beauty. Snarling and bounding- putting on a show. Hyde braced himself for his night of fun. ... When he seen the head go down, the beast tensed up and opened his mouth. Ready to bite down on the black half-bred. Ready to draw the taste of sweet blood. The brute opened his mouth and raised his head, Ready to kill Hyde in one single impact. Hyde bit down, hoping he hit his spot. OOC:// Sorry for it being short. I'm going through something with a buddy- very hard to explain.

[Demogorgon©®™]

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[atrb=background,http://i191.photobucket.com/albums/z102/alison_rules/background-9.jpg] This is all child's play... Tongue slipped under his teeth as he watched the smaller male. Ears flopped back and paws grasped the earth. He didn't know much of this odd fruit that stood upon his land. His body made contact yet again but this time the small wolf had made the bite. Demogorgon didn't make a sound, his back arched as the loner's sharp canine teeth grabbed onto his back. Now luckily Demogorgon had thick fur which helped protect him, but his alpha blood was shed. It trickled down his ebonite coat and though the bite wasn't to deep it still caused his back to go numb. Ears flattened and Dee snarled teeth showed as he reached up and mouth parted. His back still in the grasp of this smaller dog. Why was he crouching? Dee's thoughts brought him to his reality as he finally stood up tall. Much larger then this hyena looking animal. He must of lifted this canine onto his tippy toes. Teeth gnashed out and latched onto the fruity male's shoulder meat. Teeth didn't sink in just yet he didn't have a good grasp, he could but he waited. His back no longer hurt the weight of the not to much smaller wolf made his side ache. Teeth holding onto him tightly, they were in a knot now. Who would let go first? Would this male turn and let go only to grab onto Dee again? Dee lowered his jaw but held tightly he protected his neck and ears so that the male could not get them. He held on teeth sinking into the tough meat of his shoulder. Come on fag boy... show me a good fight.

[Bumble ♬]

[JUDGING]

((Hyde:

• Most posts are of good length +1
  
• Interesting, creative word and sentence choices +2
  
• Describes the moves well +1
  
• Describes character’s appearance well +1
  
• Few sentence fragments, spelling/grammar mistakes -1
  = 4 points

Demogorgon:

• Pretty long length of posts +1
  
• Interesting word choices +2
  
• Good descriptions of personality, appearance, actions +2
  
• Interesting fighting moves +1
  
• Few sentence fragments, spelling/grammar mistakes -1
  = 5 points

So, Demogorgon will win this battle. This is my first time judging a post with these kinds of rules, so I guess I'll get better at it soon, hopefully. xD))