HYDE} i know for show -! (PRIVATE/ACELIA)

[Bumble ♬]

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[atrb=background,http://i51.tinypic.com/1zzke3l.jpg] [scrolly:h(232),w(340),sy] Down in Acelia’s throat, a growl rumbled as the rogue stepped forwards aggressively. Suddenly, he whipped around and snapped his jaws closed, trying to catch the Alphess’ neck with his sharp teeth. Fortunately, he hadn’t snapped his jaws shut on Acelia’s neck, instead he missed them, but it was a close one. If the rogue had managed to latch onto Acelia’s throat, she would have been badly wounded, and might have even died if the wound couldn’t heal, or if it got infected. Acelia took a quick step back, stepping out of the reach of her opponent. Unsheathing her claws, she swiped her claws forwards, hoping to rake them across the rogue’s face. It was quite a simple move, but effective as well. If her aim was right, Acelia might even rake a claw across his dark eyes, leaving a deep scar that might blind him forever. That was if she was lucky though. Most likely she would just leave a small, but painful scratch. [/scrolly]

[[ WOLVERINE ]]

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[atrb=background,http://i55.tinypic.com/skzx9j.jpg] The pale thing stepped back just in time- avoiding Hyde's grip before stepping forward again with her claws going for his face. Hyde watched her paw come up from the ground and dash for him. He jolted back, but her claws graced over his beautiful pelt and finally his his leg before falling to the ground. His precious blood fading out into his masterpiece. Hyde's eyes turned to stone as anger pulsed through his veins- ready to kill rather than to get his fun. His hacles raised as his tail stood straight out. His ears down as snarls escaped. Hyde was ready to snare his prey and the traps were set and waiting to snap shut. Hyde felt the sting of the pain as his snarls grew louder and his eyes looking of blood-lust. He's ready to kill. He's ready to get his reward. He's ready. Hyde' leaped forward in one single, easy stride. His claws ready to tear into flesh. His teeth ready to rip whatever they could get a hold of into bloody pieces, His muscles tensed and corded under his painted coat from the adrenaline of the moment. His coat still matted with blood from various other encounters that he has not had the pleasures of having cleaned off yet. Hyde went for her unprotected abdomen. His mouth foaming red from his earlier defeat over the black mongrel's blood. His powerful claws stretched out- hoping to get her onto the ground so she can see his true authority over the world. His teeth ready to tear her up as a back up if his claws miss. Nothing is above the gods and this is no exception. This is the king of the strays! Why do you think that you can take on something the devil himself will not touch? Do you want to prove yourself? What is going through your head? Make sure you know exactly who you are before messing with the higher powers such as a god- your world might not be as long as you like. Give up now and give yourself to him or he will take it through your soul.

[Demogorgon©®™]

[JUDGING]

((Hyde:

• Most posts are of good length +2
  
• Interesting, creative word and sentence choices +3
  
• Describes the moves well +2
  
• Describes character’s appearance well +3
  
• A few spelling mistake.-1
  = 9 points

Acelia:

• Pretty long length of posts +1
  
• Interesting word choices +2
  
• Good descriptions of personality, appearance, actions +3
  
• Interesting fighting moves +1
  
• No spelling mistakes+1
  = 8 points

So, Hyde will win this battle.